After me and Clayton are both done with our poems, BUT ONLY AFTER, others may begin to post critique. also, the winner is decided by a poll. Vote Mushroom or Clayton.
You're up Clayton, May the best man win!
P.S.
also, the contestants may vote for themselves because you have to vote in able to see the results.
ClaytonDaBest
Im going to keep my poem on the same storyline, but ill revise it ill post to tell u when im done
Mushroom
umm, so the one about sin is your entry?
ClaytonDaBest
yes, cuz sins cool
Mushroom
o, I didn't know, I thought you were gonna make an original poem.
I'm gonna make an original...
Mushroom
SFJ Haiku
"Addicted to action"
Forever pwning it up,
We are the victors.
Mushroom
OK PEEPS, VOTE IT UP
Claytondabest: "Ode to Sin" wrote:
SinisterFlesh, SinisterFlesh, tis be a jolly dude
Playing games, owning ass, but never ever crude(ahem)
Frollicing merrily showing his skills,
Infact hes so good, you'll head for the hills
SinisterFlesh once played a game we all know the best,
But now hes puttin 45's. out in the wild west
A tribute to SinisterFlesh this has been
But now we must part ,not for long,
Because i know deep in my soul
That we shall meet a'gain.
By: CLAYTON
VS.
Mushroom: "SFJ Haiku" wrote:
"Addicted to action"
Forever pwning it up,
We are the victors.
By: MUSHROOM
ClaytonDaBest
nice haiku, i love haikus. Alright guys!
Mushroom
people, PARTICIPATE!
Mushroom
bah, screw this, no one wants to participate =(
ClaytonDaBest
This is friggen crazy , so I win By default!
Promethius
I cast my vote.
ClaytonDaBest
ur probably the only one who will vote lol, mush probably has it. Haikus are usually more widely broadcasted because they mean something in a little form. Mush made a good 1 tho. I hope we get more voters
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